Reviewer Info

Thank you for devoting the time to the Critical Design Review (CDR) process.  This review is targeted to a high-level perspective from multiple viewpoints described in the Personas – FRDM Dev Rebuild page.

I’ve made a number of comments on the pages in Page Info – FRDM Dev Rebuild.

In my view, the baptism page can be significantly improved.  I’ve captured some info from previous versions at Baptism Archive – FRDM Dev Rebuild that may be beneficial.  Please do review this page during CDR.

The site is not yet optimized for mobile (phone/tablet) viewing.  It will functions, but many things will be improperly sized or out of place.  After CDR is complete, I’ll smooth all this out while making the updates.

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